Comments on: graphite and steel

By: nectarfizz

nectarfizz — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 03:33:42 +0000

and the world is far, far, away….whhoooooo…shivers.

By: purefnevyl

purefnevyl — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 00:58:25 +0000

You hit the ball out of the park on this one.

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 00:31:08 +0000

Your play with words is amazing..

By: Stacey

Stacey — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 21:40:40 +0000

Ozy, words that are speaking volumes!!

By: prettybones

prettybones — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 18:28:37 +0000

I like how you play with form, very cool poem.

By: Batbitch

Batbitch — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:37:56 +0000

I like it.

By: Paul

Paul — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 10:10:54 +0000

I had to look currier up, it says someone who does the last bit of dressing of hide before it goes to the leathermaker. Very subtle and kind of haunting, just traces of being,

By: noahthegreat

noahthegreat — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 03:33:03 +0000

I had to read it a few times. Good work!

By: kwenger

kwenger — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 02:35:46 +0000

It’s always good to see a poem about silence or other abnormal sounds of life, and it’s strange to think that silence should become the abnormal thing. The intrusion of life into that silence should be the abnormal thing. Indeed, I’d like to keep graphite and steel outside my door also, but they always find some way of creeping in.

excellent poem

By: enigma

enigma — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 22:28:03 +0000

Lovely, cocooned inside, whilst the world spins