Comments on: Burning Silos http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/ with what eyes do we see? Fri, 25 Jul 2008 14:53:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU By: Cynthia http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7467 Cynthia Wed, 14 May 2008 01:55:58 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7467 this reminds me of a vampire, thinking of a lost love or more maybe of a life that could have been. this reminds me of a vampire, thinking of a lost love or more maybe
of a life that could have been.

]]> By: Stef http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7439 Stef Mon, 12 May 2008 10:08:13 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7439 interesting, you're very dark these days, what's up? interesting, you’re very dark these days, what’s up?

]]> By: mariacristina http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7437 mariacristina Mon, 12 May 2008 01:20:53 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7437 A sublime poem, a treatise of despair. The eyes fading to parchment is quite vivid, but really, the whole poem is. Wonderful title too. A sublime poem, a treatise of despair. The eyes fading to parchment is quite vivid, but really, the whole poem is. Wonderful title too.

]]> By: Meg http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7435 Meg Sun, 11 May 2008 20:29:06 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7435 Yes, I agree--I'm into it. Yes, I agree–I’m into it.

]]> By: Stacey http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7434 Stacey Sun, 11 May 2008 18:48:22 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7434 Oooh Ozy, I especially like............... "My eyes shrivel Becoming parchment Fading to the back of my head Wanting to see no more" :-D Oooh Ozy,
I especially like……………

“My eyes shrivel
Becoming parchment
Fading to the back of my head
Wanting to see no more”
:-D

]]> By: amandzing http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7428 amandzing Sat, 10 May 2008 14:04:47 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7428 brilliant. brilliant.

]]> By: liquid http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7425 liquid Sat, 10 May 2008 03:52:34 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7425 This piece sits very delicately on my pallate. WOW....... This piece sits very delicately on my pallate.

WOW…….

]]> By: Greybeard http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7424 Greybeard Sat, 10 May 2008 03:45:52 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7424 Is this a dope poem? If it isn't it sure a hell outta be. (If I'm displaying my strong sense of the obvious please forgive me for I know not what I do.) Is this a dope poem? If it isn’t it sure a hell outta be. (If I’m displaying my strong sense of the obvious please forgive me for I know not what I do.)

]]> By: whypaisley http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7423 whypaisley Sat, 10 May 2008 01:45:09 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7423 this makes me wonder,, if what we reap is not so much what we have sewn... but what we have left behind.... this makes me wonder,, if what we reap is not so much what we have sewn… but what we have left behind….

]]> By: johemmant http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/burning-silos/#comment-7421 johemmant Fri, 09 May 2008 21:37:26 +0000 http://ozymandiaz.wordpress.com/?p=250#comment-7421 This is very good, Ozy: I turn to the hand of my hope Cold pale fingers in my palm Is there not one more breath? This is very good, Ozy:
I turn to the hand of my hope
Cold pale fingers in my palm
Is there not one more breath?

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